Tuesday, January 22, 2013

ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY


Did you ever experience violence at school because you did something wrong?
If you did it affect you in a good way or bad way?
Corporal punishment effects are good because it is fast,but on the other side,
it is really bad for students. Therefore corporal punishment in school should be banned.
These are the reasons why.

First, it is not the teacher's job to hit students.
Why do you think there are teacher's in school?
Because, they have to fix students behavior.
Teachers have to be like friends to the students.
Then when students have problems,they will tell it to their teachers.
Teachers have to try to solve problems with students,but not hit them.
In evidence, there was a teacher who hit a student a hundred times so the student committed suicide.

Second,students are not just animals.
People are not the same as bears or fish.
 Our brains are more developed than them.
You will feel mad if someone said you are chicken right?
Animals can't communicate with us, so we trained them by hitting,but humans are different.We can fix bad behavior by talking then everyone will be happy.

On the other hand, some people think it is really fast to fix students behavior.
Talk to behavior,some student can't fix bad behavior but with corporal punishment it is really effective.And when the student is great person, they will appreciate to teacher who fixed their bad behavior.But it can't be effective because most of the students hate their teacher if they get hurt.

Also, pro teams think it just for student. They think teachers didn't mean it.
But some teachers hit their students when their mood is bad.So I think it is bad to do violent.We can solve it by communication.

So with this reasons,I think corporal punishment is very bad for students in school.
Because it isn't the teacher's job to hit and student aren't animal. They can communicate with them. Also, there are many punishment without violent.
We have to respect human right. Violent is bad!!




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